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Monday, February 25, 2013

The True Chimpanzee


I am a chimpanzee.

I am athletic when I want to be 
swinging from vine to vine
chewing bananas like a wolverine

But yes I can also be funny, creative, and thoughtful
nurture a kids soul with laughter when they go to the zoo
the wild makes me feel so very free 

Point blank Told from a Different Dimension

Authors Note: This essay is about point of view and how it can change the readers mood.

Alex Rider is an average 14 year old boy would would jump at the chance of becoming a spy. Luckily for him he got that chance. The story Point Blank, by Anthony Horowitz is basically about Alex Rider investigating a mysterious school out in the middle of nowhere. He works for M16 who believes that there is a connection between the school and the death of two fathers. Point Blank is told from the main character, Alex's, point of view. Alex's point of view can cause the reader to get a different perspective about the story compared to if the principal of the school, Dr. Grief, were to tell the story.


The book being told from Alex Rider can really affect how the reader feels about certain events. For example when Alex disobeyed Dr. Grief by leaving his room, the reader would get the impression that Alex was being good because he could discover something bad about the school. If the story would have been told from Dr. Griefs point of view the reader wouldn't have got the same impression. 
The reader would most likely get the sense that Alex was a terrible kid who didn't obey the rules. Another event where the characters would send out two different points of view is when Dr. Grief captured Alex after he figured out Alex was a spy. Dr. Grief then told Alex his long term plan which involved cloning himself. From Alex's point of view it seemed as if Dr. Grief was a creepy old man who only possessed evil. If this scene were to be told from Dr. Grief's point of view the reader would get the impression that Dr. Grief was a great scientist whose plans were trying to be ruined. 

Alex leaped from his bedroom window right into a soft pile of snow. He had to find a way to the forbidden top floor of the school undetected. He decided that he would go back through the front door and figure out a plan when he gets there. As soon as he walked through the doors he was unexpectedly acquainted by Dr. Grief. The whole mission was over and so is his life. This was a scene from the story with an alternate ending. If this were to have actually happened the reader would believe that Alex had failed and that Dr. Grief, the villain, was going to succeed with his plan. If this would have been told from Dr. Grief's point of view the reader would get the feeling that Dr. Grief the magnificent was finally going to succeed now that he got rid of the pesky spy.  

The mood the reader receives is defiantly something that changes from different character's point of view. That's not the only thing that changed. The other thing that changed was the readers feeling about certain characters. When you're reading a story where a character may come across as a bad person, try to think about how they might feel about certain things. Doing that will give you a better understanding of their true intentions. 

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

The Journey of Dan Smith


Dan Smith was just an average man who had the same old boring job of sitting behind a desk. From a coworkers point of view it would seem as if he were the most boring person ever. What his peers did't know was his true dream. That dream was to go on an adventure to a jungle in the Middle of Guyana. His intentions of going there were simple. His family had past down a map from generation to generation. Dan didn't know exactly what it led to but he did know it was something special that his family had left for future findings. The only thing holding him back was the ability to make friends. He just needed two people that would be willing to go on a dangerous adventure in the middle of nowhere. After work Dan goes to the library to read about the agriculture of Guyana. He has been talking to the librarian, Lauren Jemni, for a while and he is thinking about asking her to come with him. Once he finally got the nerve to ask her she accepted. Luckily she also got her sister to come along.

Thursday October 3rd is when they left. They had to find a private pilot to take them to the middle of the Guyana's jungles. Once they arrived they had to be personally driven to the starting point of Dan's map. They got driven by a young man in his little 4 door jeep. The jungle they drove through was as cluttered as the streets of Las Vegas.
" Do you know know when we are going to get there?" said Lauren's sister, Rebecca. 

"We will be there in under 15 minutes" said the driver.   

By the time they got there everyone had decided that they would want to make camp for sleep so they would have full energy in the morning. 

"Ahh alright guys lets eat breakfast and then head out for the day" said Dan.

" My map says that we better head north for at least 10 miles to find our next checkpoint'' Dan said.

" Alright then lets get moving!" said the anxious Karen.

They had reached there destination bu there was a problem. There was nothing around them but a big circle of open dirt. Dan held the map up to the light as if it was going to show some kind of hidden path. ''Nothing". Rebecca pointed at a tree with a confused face.
'' There! I think I saw light flicker from the stump of that tree"

With extreme effort they managed to peel the bark off the tree. What happened next was one of the most astonishing things any of them had ever experienced. There in the middle of the jungle was a ladder in the inside of a tree leading straight down into a very bright pit.

" Well lets go" said Rebecca. 

When they got to the bottom there was a hallway that led to a pit of gold. Or at least stuff that looked like gold.

" Does this stuff feel a little fake to any of you guys"

At that moment he realized was a trap. The ceiling caved in and they were all killed at impact. 


Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Katniss and Peeta Combined Personality

Authors Note: The two characters, Katniss and Peeta, had different points of view in many situations throughout The Hunger Games although there were ways to combine them. 


In The Hunger Games, the starlight put on Katniss Everdeen makes Peeta feel like he's part of the shadows. Both of them were selected in the annual hunger games to fight to their death against other children. From the perspective of Peeta, events feel a lot more different than Katniss, the main character's, point of view. In most of the situations the two characters will have a different point of view. In the book The Hunger Games there are events that would be told differently from two different characters. 

One way Peeta's point of view could affect the interpretation is when he and his gang were chasing after Katniss. From the readers point of view it seemed as if Peeta had turned on Katniss and was now trying to kill her. What the reader didn't know was the fact that Peeta was really trying to protect Katniss. Another scene where the reader may get a different interperpretation is when Peeta announces to the fans that he has had a crush on Katniss since he was a little kid. This would seem like Peeta was was trying to make Katniss look like a weak person form Katniss's view. You can't really tell Peeta's real intentions from the story. Peeta's real intention was to try and make Katniss like him more. 

While Peeta's view made things seem different, there was a way the author could have mixed in Peeta's view into Katniss's view. For instance when Katniss made it seem like she really did have a crush on Peeta the author could have had Katniss speak her mind. The author could have had Katniss say something like " I like Peeta a lot just not in a relationship kind of way". This way we would no that their relationship in the games was just for show.

In the end Katniss and Peeta had a different point of view in several situations. Even though their point of view was different at some times; there was a way the author could have added both views to each other. No matter what you read you always have to think of how the other characters may be seeing the event.